Elevator Pitch No.2
I guess the most important feedback to me was the fact that even
though some of the surfers thought using my service would kind of cheating
because it eliminated paddling most of them would still use the service. This
was very important to me as a lot of surfers would say “if you can’t paddle
out, then you shouldn’t be out” What that really means is don’t crowd the line
up.
I guess the feedback that was most surprising was why the
demographics of surfers is relevant to potential investors. However, I think
that was a pretty good question that I addressed in my second pitch. To answer
that question, I addressed the fact that knowledge of my target market would
let me know if my services were affordable.
Based on the feedback I received, I used my second pitch to
build on the first pitch and answered some of the questions that came up in the
first interviews.
Hey James!
ReplyDeleteI think that your idea is very creative. You seem to be very passionate about your idea, but you also seem to have done extensive research on how to implement the idea. Not only have you decided who your best target audience is, but you know how to effectively reach them. I enjoyed listening to your pitch, and I think that surfing enthusiasts would be very interested.
I did my elevator pitch on a way to improve UF's campus. If you're interested or would like to offer some feedback, check out my blog post at http://mbvandepol.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi James,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was very professional and you have a great idea for the market. I do not think there is anything out on the market like that! You really got involved with your pitch and I think it is a great example for others to see in the future.
Heres mine!
http://ericanudelman.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
James,
ReplyDeleteI respect your professionalism, creativity, and confidence in the idea. It is clear that you have done extensive research and spent time blueprinting your idea. Not only does your product have potential, but it is quite pursue-able and can really change the market. I enjoyed your pitch and look forward to seeing your success soon.
I have also attached the link to my pitch and would love your feedback and input as well.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Best of Luck,
Louis DiPaolo Jr.
Hello James, I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. The way you dressed up, the suitable background and fluency speaking made your pitch professional and reliable of your idea. I never tried to go surfing before, but I think your idea is creative and works for the target customers you aimed for. It is very specific and I want to know this service more. You can take a look at my post here. http://yukikokurashima.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-week7.html
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